logo critique, yo!
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- coco_ono0
Thanks for all the help, y'alls!
- Scotch_Roman0
sgood.
I think the small size of the tagline will give you grief at business card size. I'd track out the name a bit more, and make Vietnamese Ice Cream about a point size bigger. Don't track it in any further, though. I would, however, tighten the space between words—you could take out almost half of those spaces and still read three words there. Right now I see holes.
- coco_ono0
good point. ^
- doesnotexist0
good concept, 3rd definitely.
where are the other concepts? this is 3 options for 1 concept - do you guys really deliver this many options per concept? I don't get it.
- version30
i like how the mark doesn't look like ice cream cliches
- Ambushstudio0
We usually try to deliver 3 concepts and as many options for each as we can, sometimes 10, as long as they're solid of course.
- doesnotexist0
maybe put a hyphen in ice-cream. and use the same m's you're using in the KEM part.
- Juddly0
I'm thinking the inner (white) of the outlines is too thin, either have it the same weight as the other lines or lose it. Also I'd bring up the ornaments a little in size, they'll get lost at small scale. Same with the byline.
Nice work though.
- drgss0
yeah too thin in general
- utopian0
Nice work overall, I am leaning towards #3