logo critique, yo!
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- utopian0
Nice work overall, I am leaning towards #3
- drgss0
yeah too thin in general
- Juddly0
I'm thinking the inner (white) of the outlines is too thin, either have it the same weight as the other lines or lose it. Also I'd bring up the ornaments a little in size, they'll get lost at small scale. Same with the byline.
Nice work though.
- doesnotexist0
maybe put a hyphen in ice-cream. and use the same m's you're using in the KEM part.
- Ambushstudio0
We usually try to deliver 3 concepts and as many options for each as we can, sometimes 10, as long as they're solid of course.
- version30
i like how the mark doesn't look like ice cream cliches
- doesnotexist0
good concept, 3rd definitely.
where are the other concepts? this is 3 options for 1 concept - do you guys really deliver this many options per concept? I don't get it.
- coco_ono0
good point. ^
- Scotch_Roman0
sgood.
I think the small size of the tagline will give you grief at business card size. I'd track out the name a bit more, and make Vietnamese Ice Cream about a point size bigger. Don't track it in any further, though. I would, however, tighten the space between words—you could take out almost half of those spaces and still read three words there. Right now I see holes.
- coco_ono0
Thanks for all the help, y'alls!
- instrmntl0
3rd seems ice creamy. others are more zen spa ish. naw mean?
- VectorMasked0
- haha - yes...i know, i know.coco_ono
- awesome! hahaha
Ambushstudio
- coco_ono0
Vector, I should be paying you for being such a good art director...
But it's okay, because I'm a student still...suckaaa! ;)
- VectorMasked0
YEAH!! *fap fap fap*
finger lickin' good!
Now... the "f" annoys me ;o) a little that angle gets too much attention imo. easy to fix if you think it needs to be dealt with.
Could be worth also rounding the middle part of the M so it's also rounded (might suck though... but consider it) and the M could also be moved like a milimetre closer to the E.
- VectorMasked0
and please... If you do end up doing some packaging for them... post it here. It will be "hawt"! :o)
- i will do packaging for them as well as the interior store.coco_ono
- Good luck with all that. Fun job.VectorMasked