Logo Crit
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- d_rek0
I'm not feeling the type solution right now... the letterforms feel too condensed to compliment the mark. However... and this may be a good or bad thing depending on who you are but at first I understood the yin/yang... but after staring at the mark for another minute i understood it was fish/whales/whatever as well. I'm not sold on the tales yet though. I think it's a good direction though, refine it a bit and it will be a good logo!
- MondoMorphic0
Great - thanks for all the high-quality feedback (and carp) everybody! It's back to the drawing board with some wonderful suggestions.
- MondoMorphic0
- still something off about it. have you tried this using small eyes?skt
- dbloc0
- yeah, I'm thinking the gradient is only reinforcing the mark's tennis ball-ness!MondoMorphic
- dbloc0
they need to look more like fish
- doctor0
It doesn't say tennis to me. I see the fishies right away.
Whereas I prefer the illustration of sample c, I think you should just go for the straight type treatment of sample d. That connection between N and D doesn't work for me.
- MondoMorphic0
- It's supposed to say fish and yin yang.MondoMorphic
- too distractingdbloc
- try to make eyes without making them so literaldbloc
- jiaf0
- dbloc0
another idea. see if you can make the tail of each fish work with the fin of the other.
- aaux0
please stay away from the ying and yang deal