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- pengcito
What do you guys think? It's still a little rough, but I would love any feedback.
Thanks!
- mg330
How did you get that image there without me being able to click it and see a larger version?
- tasty0
"I can be found wasting time on any of these wonderful networks."
- i dont think clients or future employers want to hear that.
- Ruffian0
Are you Ronald Jenkees?
- pengcito0
That's true, thanks.
- lumedia0
Header graphic is huge and too complicated. The venn diagram idea is okay but nothing that hasnt been done plenty already.
- Nairn0
- It's a bit too spaced out - text leading, etc.
- I think the labels for the head diagram are a little weak - perhaps utilise the non-italic version of the font you've used for your logo? The connection to your Name tag below isn't clear either. I think it just needs 'more'.
- The squiggly form is a bit much. If you insist on it, make more of it - it's kind of not really doing anything.
- I'd try it without the gradient at the top - that's distracting too. Also, it dulls your colour scheme.
- The concept and glasses thing are a little pretentious/gay
- ukit0
Image not clickable...I...eh....*head explodes*
- pengcito0
I'm sorry dudes, here you go:
<a href="http://www.mikecuesta.com/mike_cuesta.jpg">Link to Image
</a>
- pengcito0
Ahhh, epic fail again!
- ukit0
No, it was epic success the first time! I'm just trying to figure out how you did it LOL
- ukit0
First off, I really like the color scheme you chose. Maybe it's just personal taste but I love dark background with pink-blue-purple color scheme.
But your layout seems a little haphazard. The negative space around it seems kind of undefined and amorphous with everything centered in the middle. The spacing seems weird as well.
Also the type needs work. The nav type doesn't seem to fit with the logo, and the block of copy below that seems awkward because you needlessly hypenated one of the words and the last word is stuck out there on it's own.
For the portfolio, do you have just one item, or will there be more? If so, is it all one page or do I click through to another page?
Overall, I think it's a good start in terms of overall look and feel, but you need to go back to the drawing board for the layout and grid.
- moamoa0
1. remove facebook, twitter ... from your site!
- ukit0
Also, if it's all on one page, it doesn't really make any sense for the nav to be highlighted, does it?
- pengcito0
ukit, I actually agree with everything your saying. I haven't been able to devout enough time into the project and I know it shows. Everything you mentioned is definitely something that I need to reexamine.
Thanks alot.
- powertoni0
is this gonna be a wordpress template?
Seems to me that you have a lot of negative space that keeps it from being coherent. Try tightening the elements up a bit and definitely revisit the type
- Llyod0
it gives me a headache...I have one to begin with mainly do to playing tf2 on xbox
- Jnr_Madison0
Reminds me of MasterCard :D
- cashface0
Good start...one word, orphan in the first paragraph
- _salisae_0
i like the illustration work but the type looks kind of stale.