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• Nairn0

  - It's a bit too spaced out - text leading, etc.
  - I think the labels for the head diagram are a little weak - perhaps utilise the non-italic version of the font you've used for your logo? The connection to your Name tag below isn't clear either. I think it just needs 'more'.
  - The squiggly form is a bit much. If you insist on it, make more of it - it's kind of not really doing anything.
  - I'd try it without the gradient at the top - that's distracting too. Also, it dulls your colour scheme.
  - The concept and glasses thing are a little pretentious/gay

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  • but what the fuck do i know? These are just my thoughts, and they're 10 a penny.Nairn
  • make that 40.Nairn
  • Don't get me wrong, I kind of want to like the concept thing - but then i'm pretentious and 2 fifths gay.Nairn
  • I appreciate all the feedback duder.pengcito

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