Crit the Pasciifolio v2
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- pascii0
>bump
- PSYKHO0
Much much better pascii, have you tried it in a dark gray?
- Fariska0
Way better, clearer and immediate.
the left hand nav need more hierarchy (a thing that the right-hand side box has) and i'd play a bit with the highlighted status (what about extending the highlight box to the left margin?)
Other than that i'd try a dark warm grey as a bg.
But now is a proper folio.
- i'll work on that navi. it still doesn't do it for me either..
pascii
- i'll work on that navi. it still doesn't do it for me either..
- 23kon0
will the rulers around the top and down the left be animated?
:)
- rafalski0
I like chalet used for logo
- pascii0
i will fiddle around with the navigation and look for that warm gray. thanks for the crit so far!
- 7point340
honestly dude, i'm liking it a lot.
the spacing in the nav is a bit odd though.
- pascii0
Made up a new thread to keep it easier to follow
- drgs0
You spent two weeks on changing colors to brown?
- been too busy with other stuff
pascii - you reckon?mimeartist
- @ drgsmimeartist
- drgs has a problem with brown. people that is.skt
- been too busy with other stuff
- dearhead0
way better.
- skt0
"Other than that i'd try a dark warm grey as a bg."
I would agree. Then use greys and whites for your type, reduce the size of your logo by half, have it in white, and tighten up your menus.
- rodzilla0
I feel like the colors and layout fit your work a bit better. It does exactly what you need it to do, look forward to seeing it functional.
- gramme0
1. That's not Chalet.
2. Definitely lose the little frog-man. He brings the whole thing down about five notches. He's pointless, distracting and makes you look less professional. Don't hold onto something merely because it's been with you for some time.
- Fariska0
About the nav: you can have 2 (slightly) different colors: 1 for the works 1 for other, or you can box the works in a box (named works) and the other info in an other box (named info), you can indent the works as sublinks etc etc.....
- have a look here:
http://www.smashingm…
Fariska - you're right... i will work on that this weekendpascii
- have a look here: