Crit the Pasciifolio v2
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- Fariska0
About the nav: you can have 2 (slightly) different colors: 1 for the works 1 for other, or you can box the works in a box (named works) and the other info in an other box (named info), you can indent the works as sublinks etc etc.....
- have a look here:
http://www.smashingm…
Fariska - you're right... i will work on that this weekendpascii
- have a look here:
- gramme0
1. That's not Chalet.
2. Definitely lose the little frog-man. He brings the whole thing down about five notches. He's pointless, distracting and makes you look less professional. Don't hold onto something merely because it's been with you for some time.
- 7point340
honestly dude, i'm liking it a lot.
the spacing in the nav is a bit odd though.
- drgs0
still misses something...
make it even lighter and add a horizontal line under logo
- canuck0
i like this one a lot more
- kelpie0
I quite like the golden too, though I think the warm grey brings the colours in the work out more (a client would say they seemed more "zingy")
I like this now, but I do think you should look at the detailing of the menu, its a bit sparse at the moment. It either needs to be set with a finer consideration (line height etc) or given extra elements graphically imo.
gettin there! :)
- itstimefortea0
lose the guy in the top corner. i like the golden one too. try your logo in a darker tone rather than lighter. i think it'll look pretty slick then.
- chossy0
My honest answer is I like the GOLDEN colors that you posted and I don't mind brown atall, as for the pascii text I would have it as one o the hues of brown and lower the opacity quite allot, same with the wee alien froggy guy in the top right, I also don't like the new underscores you have, I much prefer the old way, with a box round the button, have this as a lower opacity box as well, or don't do any of these things and simply have a wee cigarette a beer and look out the window and realise that humans were only really meant to sit on a tree stump and watch maize grow.
- skt0
"Other than that i'd try a dark warm grey as a bg."
I would agree. Then use greys and whites for your type, reduce the size of your logo by half, have it in white, and tighten up your menus.
- drgs0
You spent two weeks on changing colors to brown?
- been too busy with other stuff
pascii - you reckon?mimeartist
- @ drgsmimeartist
- drgs has a problem with brown. people that is.skt
- been too busy with other stuff
- pascii0
i will fiddle around with the navigation and look for that warm gray. thanks for the crit so far!
- rafalski0
I like chalet used for logo