Crit the Pasciifolio v2
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- pascii
i've added some changes and redesigned it.
specially on the colors. they might be a bit too dark on
windows.Now it takes 3 Clicks to go to the Detail, and it's a more simple.
I will Code the Site in Plone, so i try to keep things really slick.
Home and Links:
Overview:
Detail:
- pascii0
Made up a new thread to keep it easier to follow
- dearhead0
way better.
- rodzilla0
I feel like the colors and layout fit your work a bit better. It does exactly what you need it to do, look forward to seeing it functional.
- pascii0
>bump
- PSYKHO0
Much much better pascii, have you tried it in a dark gray?
- Fariska0
Way better, clearer and immediate.
the left hand nav need more hierarchy (a thing that the right-hand side box has) and i'd play a bit with the highlighted status (what about extending the highlight box to the left margin?)
Other than that i'd try a dark warm grey as a bg.
But now is a proper folio.
- i'll work on that navi. it still doesn't do it for me either..
pascii
- i'll work on that navi. it still doesn't do it for me either..
- 23kon0
will the rulers around the top and down the left be animated?
:)
- rafalski0
I like chalet used for logo
- pascii0
i will fiddle around with the navigation and look for that warm gray. thanks for the crit so far!
- drgs0
You spent two weeks on changing colors to brown?
- been too busy with other stuff
pascii - you reckon?mimeartist
- @ drgsmimeartist
- drgs has a problem with brown. people that is.skt
- been too busy with other stuff
- skt0
"Other than that i'd try a dark warm grey as a bg."
I would agree. Then use greys and whites for your type, reduce the size of your logo by half, have it in white, and tighten up your menus.
- pascii0
Golden:
Here with the warm Gray.
Web 2.0ish
- chossy0
When you post a note next to one of the pages it looks like the wee guy in the top right is saying it.
- chossy0
that didn't work well you need to not type anythign the begin with
- chossy0
My honest answer is I like the GOLDEN colors that you posted and I don't mind brown atall, as for the pascii text I would have it as one o the hues of brown and lower the opacity quite allot, same with the wee alien froggy guy in the top right, I also don't like the new underscores you have, I much prefer the old way, with a box round the button, have this as a lower opacity box as well, or don't do any of these things and simply have a wee cigarette a beer and look out the window and realise that humans were only really meant to sit on a tree stump and watch maize grow.
- itstimefortea0
lose the guy in the top corner. i like the golden one too. try your logo in a darker tone rather than lighter. i think it'll look pretty slick then.
- kelpie0
I quite like the golden too, though I think the warm grey brings the colours in the work out more (a client would say they seemed more "zingy")
I like this now, but I do think you should look at the detailing of the menu, its a bit sparse at the moment. It either needs to be set with a finer consideration (line height etc) or given extra elements graphically imo.
gettin there! :)
- canuck0
i like this one a lot more