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- Jaline0
Hey, detritus, stop typing in a better manner than I can ;)
- neue75_bold0
I'd love to chime in, but hey...
- I don't care...neue75_bold
- that's not to say I don't like you or your work, cause I do...neue75_bold
- both even...neue75_bold
- I'm just not sure...neue75_bold
- what I could or would say...neue75_bold
- regarding said illustration...neue75_bold
- I mean..neue75_bold
- it's your thing...neue75_bold
- and you wear it well...neue75_bold
- JackRyan0
I think it would be cool if you inked it with a brush.
- dbloc0
I like it dude. might look cool as a duotone.
- doesnotexist0
don't like it. looks like something i drew in 7th grade during a boring history class session.
- ********0
I finished my fly picture. Just thought I'd bump the thread for anyone who commented who might want to see it completed. The finished piece is in the OP on page one. Its rolled up already and stuffed behind my easel to be forgotten. A blank square of paper now awaits a new idea. Thanks for the comments and feedback, as always the most negative was the most constructive. Anyway, I'm outta here. S'long.
Spookytim.
- myshoeshurt0
don't think it would be as powerful in color, but maybe some solid grey tones to make white areas pop even more. i would take it to stinkos and scan it in to small scale and do some experimental coloring before deciding.
- creative-0
b Ü d
- roger840
i think that fluor colors in some parts of the criature it would be nice
- ********0
I decided not to colour it. I decided it was best to finsih it off, cut it down and get going on soemthing new. It may be a bit confusing becuase you are viewing the finished piece in post number one which also asks for opinions on colours etc. I've just updated the image on my website so it automatically updates in the OP here. But the piece is now completed as you see it on page one and has already been put away. I just tought I'd bump the thread for anyone who commented to see how it ended up.
Cheers.
- I like the scale you are working in- not easy...sumi ink and brush next/ faster might be interesing for you********
- I like the scale you are working in- not easy...sumi ink and brush next/ faster might be interesing for you
- Jaline0
It's really pretty now! I like it.
- Spookytim0
Next piece... I had sketched this out a while ago but work got in the way so I put it under the easel until today. Although I have a heap of projects to contend with, I decided to treat myself to a day of drawing today, so I have done the hard pencil work on this. As before, I would love to know any comments. Negative ones - if truthful - are often the most useful to me.
Should I colour it?
Should I burn my easel and get on with paid commissions?
Should I change technique?
Improve technique?
Find some more commercial / engaging subject matter?
Does it feel original to you? Unoriginal?
Anything... I know its not that easy or interesting to comment on what is essentially a bit of doodling but it is useful to me. I need to push myself on to new territory and that means doing the complete opposite of what I do commercially and being a bit 'shit' until something original and interesting clicks.Thanks.
