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- tasty0
is the music a client request?
- dbloc0
yep
- OnesandZeros0
looks awesome. the copy is a little difficult to read on "surroundings."
- robotron3k0
I like, its a little unique but easy to navigate. I can see a subtle animation over the opening photo, might want to kill it or bump up the opacity to make is not look like a mistake. other than that, super.
- it's supposed to be for texture, but I could probably bump it up a littledbloc
- ********0
beautiful use of the flash technology
- bulletfactory0
i think it's nice - well constructed and easy to navigate, i agree with the content being difficult to read on a busy bg - maybe darken the transparent box
- neue75_bold0
Doesn't seem very dynamic or stylish to me... also, pretty dark and cold feeling for something in Hawaii... Seems like it could be for a Canadian vineyard....
- I actually just did the flash. One of our print designers designed the layout. I like the layout though.dbloc
- well then...neue75_bold
- I think more volcano-ish: black rock, red lavaPoint5
- well then...neue75_bold
- chuparosa0
Nice! Only nit picky thing would be that I'm not loving the photo of the blonde woman. She doesn't look stylish enough to me.
- ditto, she doesn't say, "Welcome to Hawaii" to me...robotron3k
- doesnotexist0
nice work ! that volume bar is a little too big for me. seems out of scale.
- i agree. we had it smaller but the client said it was too hard to see.dbloc
- harlequino0
Very nice. Can the model have larger, uh, how you say, gazungas?
- ukit0
Yeah, copy is unreadable in the Neighborhood section.
Otherwise, looks great. Music had me tapping my foot a little.
- JKilla770
The style to me says "I'm a lounge come visit me at night" I think Hawaii I think vibrant, powerful, strong. Not dark, and seductive.
- brains0
FLASH IS DEAD! :)
I keed, I keed. Looks good.
- dbloc0
thanks for the comments.
- drgs0
browsed the sections, back and forth, no idea what site is about
a hotel?