Logo Critique if you please...
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- pascii0
makes an eight for me too. the first version is "cool", downloadd it and i am fiddling around
- Ampersanderson0
Dude, i kinda love the first one. It's such a cool shape that I don't really care if it communicates the E. My only real problem (sorry to be the child in the thread) is that I see a boobie.
My second quibble would be concerning lockup in a contextual environment. Does type sit next to it? I feel that if it does, the abstract shape can exist free of the need to say everything about you.
- Mishga0
the first one is way better...Why does your logo need to mean something? i love ambiguity...
- TheBlueOne0
"What? Where is it?"
"Right there, next the the 'E'?"
"E? What bloody 'E'?"
"To the left of the 'B'."
"I see the 'B', or an 8 or something, but where's the 'E'?"
"To the left!! The left!! What are you blind? It is clearly an 'E'!"
"Ah, bloody hell. It reminds me of the Playboy logo anyway..."
"The Playboy logo? What the fuck are you getting on about?"
"Just calling it as I see it. And I don't see no bleeding 'E'."
- 7340
take the rounded one... push them back together a tad, tilt it again, and put the dot back on, just maybe not as close to the B...
and youre done... weeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
- pascii0
here's my illustratorfile
- Ampersanderson0
Concrete, I think that is all to say your logo is good like it was to begin with. I dig it.
Would certainly be interested in looking at the letterhead, etc. when you create it...
- eegrek0
i like it tilted as per your first one.
- ian0
Hey conker feet.
I got the 'B' immediately but not the 'e' but I really like the original logo, its got a lot of movement in it which is good and as people have said, almost a thought bubble appearance.I think you need to refine the e to make it more legible, maybe making the two circles in the eight different sizes might help. I had a quick goo, but its rough as a badgers bollocks.
- I really like that first option.
well done, you.detritus - meh9832892398
- like 1 but keep the dot like 2. nice.Ampersanderson
- I think the 2nd one is my original. Ian I commented on this way down there V
(auto refresh, my arse)Concrete - i like ians revised one. but with the dot as before. i think someone already said this.skt
- Yup, the 2nd is concretes original (which I still like), just put her there for comparison.ian
- same - first of ian's with old dot, please.paraselene
- I really like that first option.
- travisbarto0
Maybe it's just me but I read it as an 8 when its on an angle like that.
- chaimelimeliah0
missing something, doesnt really resonate any thoughts... seems like a knockout of something missing... very chunky, really not working on many levels...
- neue75_bold0
I like them all, but strongly advise changing your name to En Vogue and riding what's left of that ripple...
Nonsense aside, I think the first one was a winner, but let's see how it works on stationary or applications in general, as long as you're spelling out En Bloc somewhere on the same page, you could scan in a shart and call it a day...
- utopian0
- with the dot in that spot it almost feels like an 8..lifterBARON
- desmo0
the E is a bit too abstract for me. tough to read.
- former20
Looks great, but I can't see an "E" either.
Try pulling some of the neg space into the B, kinda like a subtle yin/yang graphic. That would help the E read more and might not destroy the form too much.
- max_prophet0
version one was better than both of these diluted soppy versions.
- next time I'll check for page 2 but my comment still standsmax_prophet
- i_monk0
I see B and 8; no E.