Logo Critique if you please...
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- former20
Looks great, but I can't see an "E" either.
Try pulling some of the neg space into the B, kinda like a subtle yin/yang graphic. That would help the E read more and might not destroy the form too much.
- detritus0
The thing about the first version is that as it was that much more abstracted, at an angle and mitt dot, it got away with not looking exactly like an E and a B. Now the 8 dominates, beyond the allowance benefited by the serendipitous exploit of our present-found annum.
I have here replaced insight with nonsense.
- travisbarto0
Maybe it's just me but I read it as an 8 when its on an angle like that.
- chaimelimeliah0
missing something, doesnt really resonate any thoughts... seems like a knockout of something missing... very chunky, really not working on many levels...
- max_prophet0
version one was better than both of these diluted soppy versions.
- next time I'll check for page 2 but my comment still standsmax_prophet
- neue75_bold0
I like them all, but strongly advise changing your name to En Vogue and riding what's left of that ripple...
Nonsense aside, I think the first one was a winner, but let's see how it works on stationary or applications in general, as long as you're spelling out En Bloc somewhere on the same page, you could scan in a shart and call it a day...
- utopian0
- with the dot in that spot it almost feels like an 8..lifterBARON
- i_monk0
I see B and 8; no E.
- pascii0
makes an eight for me too. the first version is "cool", downloadd it and i am fiddling around
- Ampersanderson0
Dude, i kinda love the first one. It's such a cool shape that I don't really care if it communicates the E. My only real problem (sorry to be the child in the thread) is that I see a boobie.
My second quibble would be concerning lockup in a contextual environment. Does type sit next to it? I feel that if it does, the abstract shape can exist free of the need to say everything about you.
- Mishga0
the first one is way better...Why does your logo need to mean something? i love ambiguity...
- mimeartist0
aliging the counter of the 'e' to the b is bound to make an 8...
all it says is 8 to me.
- But to be honest... does it matter... its just a marquemimeartist
- TheBlueOne0
"What? Where is it?"
"Right there, next the the 'E'?"
"E? What bloody 'E'?"
"To the left of the 'B'."
"I see the 'B', or an 8 or something, but where's the 'E'?"
"To the left!! The left!! What are you blind? It is clearly an 'E'!"
"Ah, bloody hell. It reminds me of the Playboy logo anyway..."
"The Playboy logo? What the fuck are you getting on about?"
"Just calling it as I see it. And I don't see no bleeding 'E'."
- desmo0
the E is a bit too abstract for me. tough to read.
- ian0
Ta for the nice words concrete. Hope I helped some. If your working on it today, hit us up with a revised version later on.
Oh and if nobody else has said, maybe needs a little more cowbell...