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- Concrete0
Some Nature Urban anagrams:
A Tuna Burner
Arena But Run
Urea Bun Rant
Nut Area Burn
An Untrue Bra
Tuba Near Urn
- studderine0
i like the typeface on the second one...but the logomark, symbol...whatever you want to call it doesnt fit.
- jaylarson0
what are you trying to accomplish by overlapping your n and u? it makes no sense and looks bad.
r_mutt
(Jul 5 07, 18:18)whoops, i think i forgot what i was going to say 2x ago.
with the overlap: i wanted to have the letter forms merge, and using color was effective to show both an n and a u.
unfortunately, i do know there may be a problem in my execution. the font that i bought didn't have a consistent stroke throughout the letter forms, which is what I was looking for. so the drawing board could be near. but I'm going to let this sink in a bit before i continue.
thanks for the input thus far.
- r_mutt0
BUT WHY????????????????
- jaylarson0
Nut Area Burn
An Untrue Bra
Concrete
(Jul 6 07, 06:20)thanks! you have just made my day. i needed a laugh.
- r_mutt0
MAKIE NO SENSIE!!!!!!
- jaylarson0
MAKIE NO SENSIE!!!!!!
r_mutt
(Jul 5 07, 18:26)and i will continue to do so if i no sleepie!
- lvl_130
on another note-
jay you should join up in the third round of the nt photo exchange. hasn't started yet, but keep it in mind.
- Jaline0
You have the right attitude for a PVN crit, glean from it what you can and try a different approach.
Concrete
(Jul 6 07, 05:48)completely agree
- lvl_130
i'd agree with nick on this as well. the word nurban is just, well...not as great as you may see it as. just saying it kinda gives me that chalkboard scratch feeling.
sorry man, don't mean to be harsh, but even as an mn native, i don't get it. there are just too many things that you seem to be stretching to try and make fit into this name and logo.
as stated before, the overlap of the n and u does not work, including the weird little part that looks like an 'i' because of the color change. although gotham 'is' a nice typeface, it doesn't work for this.
the colors also come off as something that comes out of the crayola 8pk. (ie. the basic set).
this may be kind of ridiculous, but to start over may not be a bad idea. maybe you could start this off while watching A.Gs' film "rivers and streams" ?
was the first thing i thought of when i read your idea behind the name haha :)
- Nairn0
nt photo exchange?
- jaylarson0
thanks lvl. the word nurban, isn't supposed to strike a chord so people recognize it is a combination of nature and urban. but i do see its short comings.
'rivers and tides' is just what the doctor ordered. thanks. good night.
- jaylarson0
on another note-
jay you should join up in the third round of the nt photo exchange. hasn't started yet, but keep it in mind.
lvl_13
(Jul 6 07, 06:22)i've been thinking about that. how do i get involved. there is a specific thread right?
- jaylarson0
bump for the morning crew and the other side of the pond.
- neue75_bold0
it's not your explanation that makes no sense, it's the idea that makes no sense, ie- it's pointless...
Nubian would be a nice name... ideally, you should be black though to pull that one off...
- chossy0
I think the name needs to be rethought to begin with :/ nurban only makes me think of urban and a nerd in a turban.
If your hands are tied and you have to go with the name nurban then perhaps have a couple of sprigs or frons coming of the n in the bottom left version and perhaps something urban like a fucking cup of coffee or a bus pass on the u, I like the idea of the bottom left one but the name is wack, also do you need the creative bit at the bottom? people already know your creative surely?.... if so then do something with the type not just a font.thats my two pennies worth now MAKE IT AGAIN ;)
- Jaline0
so I think it has been established that the name is bad.
- jaylarson0
"Survey says: Thou shall not use the names Nurban & Creative in the same breath."
- kelpie0
more that thou shalt not use the word nurban at all, mate. It sounds weird.
That may seem harsh and ignorant, but its the way I can see it being received. sorry.
- jaylarson0
no problem. i'm a big boy. i can handle criticism.