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i'd agree with nick on this as well. the word nurban is just, well...not as great as you may see it as. just saying it kinda gives me that chalkboard scratch feeling.
sorry man, don't mean to be harsh, but even as an mn native, i don't get it. there are just too many things that you seem to be stretching to try and make fit into this name and logo.
as stated before, the overlap of the n and u does not work, including the weird little part that looks like an 'i' because of the color change. although gotham 'is' a nice typeface, it doesn't work for this.
the colors also come off as something that comes out of the crayola 8pk. (ie. the basic set).
this may be kind of ridiculous, but to start over may not be a bad idea. maybe you could start this off while watching A.Gs' film "rivers and streams" ?
was the first thing i thought of when i read your idea behind the name haha :)