crit my work please
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- nash212
thank you!
- ********0
Copy at the start is hotrrible.
and if you are going to have sideways scrolling work, let the user do it with the scrollbar.
work itself seems alright.
- brains0
april fools! neuetuesday! haha. awesome.
- nash2120
wait i dont get it..u like the url name?
- drgs0
neuue tuesdaaay..
- nash2120
yup..
- vespa0
there's some nice stuff in there, i like your daft punk poster
i didn't know i had to scroll until skt said that, but then i'm a bit thick.
on that theme, not sure i really understand the copy. collateral for interactive installation?
- VectorMasked0
The scrolling is not really working there. Let people know that there is a big scrolling thing there. I noticed it after moving my cursor around quite a few times.
Overall the site looks a bit incomplete like you're still working on content and usability.
- nash2120
thanks. good points..keet it coming
- lvl_130
i would drop all of the lorem ipsum and try to put in some real copy...at least for some of them.
the copy at the front of each work section is really hard to read. i also didn't realize it scrolled (inside my browser there was about 20 pixels to scroll and i thought: is this it?)
- blackspade0
i didnt mind the scolling, it was kinda obvious!
- drgs0
yea worked for me ok
but generally dont like to scroll in both directions
- lambsy0
i don't know how anybody could miss those huge arrows that flash at the beginning of each section, but since some people are having issues with it-
perhaps have those arrows a bit smaller and always on, with a slight transparency.good point on replacing the Lorem Ipsum with real text.
another thing-
maybe make the scrolling have a little bit of velocity, and then an ease out when it stops. it might make it feel less "chunky"