crit my work please
crit my work please
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- lvl_130
i would drop all of the lorem ipsum and try to put in some real copy...at least for some of them.
the copy at the front of each work section is really hard to read. i also didn't realize it scrolled (inside my browser there was about 20 pixels to scroll and i thought: is this it?)