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- RobotGunslinger0
# 2 is the best one imo.
- MrShadow0
2. by far.
- elms0
:)
- lvl_130
yeah elms, you got some really solid work, like skambidt said!
- elms0
thanks, skambidt
- skambidt0
I think the former samples are more legible + I really like the simplicity of especially #2.
Havid said that; keep up the good work though, elms, you've got some awesomely solid pieces in your portfolio, imo. :-)
- elms0
with those spiral forms -> in my mind they are growing and expanding elements like the music is...
- elms0
:/
- Crouwel0
hmm....
- elms0
snails :P
seriously, i proposed that they should give some musical examples of every forthcoming concert, so maybe then it would be easier to make the poster.
- Nairn0
woah, that's quite a diversion...!
what do the sprial forms represent - are they relevant to Estonia somehow?
- elms0
- bjm0
Also, maybe try setting the headline type (MIRK MURDVEE) in italics, to play off the slant in the repeating lines?
Worth a shot...
- bjm0
Number 2:
tighten body type layout, maybe bolder type?
Love the repeating line, but try making the repeating lines look more like his baton.
ie: Lighter, and maybe try and a slight point?
Overall I'm really liking it. Nice work.
- elms0
thanks!
will make some lighter variations also, and then post it again.
- gramme0
2 closely followed by 1
JerseyRaindog
(Dec 20 06, 08:17)agree. I like the idea someone had about diagonal type, plus add a bit of variation in the echoed baton-lines.
Nice work, elms. :)
- contia10
watching boat sail by me...
Crouwel
- elms0
ahaa, thanks! could be the solution, will try it out.