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- elms0
mhm, they will probably like more 1 and 4, as it will be quite conservative
- elms0
thanks!
- elms0
thank you all. very helpful feedback :)
- Crouwel0
well, it ain't no skate festival.
- JerseyRaindog0
2 closely followed by 1
- elms0
- Nairn0
woah, that's quite a diversion...!
what do the sprial forms represent - are they relevant to Estonia somehow?
- elms0
snails :P
seriously, i proposed that they should give some musical examples of every forthcoming concert, so maybe then it would be easier to make the poster.
- Crouwel0
hmm....
- elms0
:/
- elms0
with those spiral forms -> in my mind they are growing and expanding elements like the music is...
- johndiggity0
1, and i echo the sentimnet those lines seem to heavy and chaotic. i like how they appear from the baton.
- bjm0
Number 2:
tighten body type layout, maybe bolder type?
Love the repeating line, but try making the repeating lines look more like his baton.
ie: Lighter, and maybe try and a slight point?
Overall I'm really liking it. Nice work.
- elms0
- skambidt0
I think the former samples are more legible + I really like the simplicity of especially #2.
Havid said that; keep up the good work though, elms, you've got some awesomely solid pieces in your portfolio, imo. :-)
- skillet0
i like 2!
- Crouwel0
it's tough. maybe try different bg shades? i can see the issue with the bottom ending of the photo though....maybe a gradient? hmm..
- Crouwel0
uhm.. i have an idea. not sure if they'd accept it..
but i need the photo of that composer to show you.. low res is fine too..
- elms0
thanks, skambidt
- lofielectronic0
2 gets my vote. 1 looks like what you might expect it to look like, i.e. proffesional but not that eyecatching but 2 looks 'diffrent'