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- xenicon0
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#666666oh, not that grace
- ender790
thanks for the advice, gramme. i feel like there is some little piece i'm missing as far as the concept of grace. i'm just not seeing it. this has been kind of a rush rush situation and i wish i had about a month to marinate on it, but i don't.
- gramme0
look it up in the Bible. Think symbols of grace.
- uberdesigner_0
I like the middle one. It shows the unity between white people learn and corpses.
- Teeuwen0
lemme give it a shot..
- redefine0
i would def fool around with the typography some more, not quite there yet. also i would try to smooth out your line in illustrator (the middle one) the lines are very angular and sharp.
- gramme0
List all the terms & mental images associated with grace. Try to find connections between the words.
i wouldn't give up just yet on the notion of a typographic tie-in...
- flavorful0
Needs more Sodom and Gomorrah.
- chossy0
number two but sort the hands out.
- flavorful0
Janne, needs more Buddy Christ.
- wordssssss0
They look like music cds and or sickers. Too much space happening, should try and condense. I like whats happening in number two but smaller/shorter.
- ender790
aaaaaaargh! now i have to toss my neon grace idea.
- ender790
thanks for your input, everybody!
*in my best dr. nick voice
- komkrktprod0
the Church of the Graceful Groove.
The choir is dope btw.
- jaylarson0
3rd seems the best and least problematic.
ditch the second one: people are sick of white hands coming from above to save those of color. grace? more like sublimation... furthermore it is kinda like what uber said: white people saving corpses...
subconscious? probably. offensive to everyone, probably not.i agree with scarabin that the first one looks feminine, kinda like hello kitty...
peace
- SAS0
You could allude the stigmata in number 2 with a heart in the hand reaching down. It might be a bit too graphic, but conceptually sound.