folio crit
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- soCivilized0
Thanks again for the help and the kind words, fellas.
- tenpointtwo0
I like your site and the way you've photographed your work...
my main crit is selection. Or at least description of selection. Going through, it seems as if a lot of projects "fell through" or are "on hold" or are personal projects. I'd leave out that information cause it makes it seem like you don't get much completed projects with actual clients.
Depending on the goal of your site (to show prospective clients, I'm assuming) I'd organize your work to maximize the impact. Put all the print stuff together. The web stuff together. The identity stuff together. And in general your descriptions sound like you're a student explaining to a teacher, rather than a designer explaining to a cient.
Looks great though. Good work
- jevad0
ah so you're the sob who did the new RR site - nice work!
- soCivilized0
I'll try and flesh out that copy a bit more - I see what you mean. Although the goal for the site is more for finding new employment than for pitching to clients atm.
jevad - well, it was me and a team of a couple others. Me being the low man on the totem pole, I built the whole site but designed portions of it. Can't take all the credit.
- jevad0
regardless - it's v. nice.
- soCivilized0
p.s. - tenpointtwo, you're one of maybe two other people I have heard of that spells their first name the same as me - "Jarrod." Wierd, no?
- soCivilized0
thanks!
- ********0
it looks nice.
the work is nice.
it is pretentious, put humor in it.
include a picture of your cock in the about section.
pray that you get a job.
- kyl30
Move your contact info to the contact section and add a full screen shot of the last web project(V1). looking good otherwise.