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Out of context: Reply #22

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  • tenpointtwo0

    I like your site and the way you've photographed your work...

    my main crit is selection. Or at least description of selection. Going through, it seems as if a lot of projects "fell through" or are "on hold" or are personal projects. I'd leave out that information cause it makes it seem like you don't get much completed projects with actual clients.

    Depending on the goal of your site (to show prospective clients, I'm assuming) I'd organize your work to maximize the impact. Put all the print stuff together. The web stuff together. The identity stuff together. And in general your descriptions sound like you're a student explaining to a teacher, rather than a designer explaining to a cient.

    Looks great though. Good work

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