logorly crit
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- PonyBoy
okay... no owls...
pic a logo:
http://www.arcademedia.net/marko…
then tell me what you think of an initial look & feel?... they alreay had the three verical slashes that make up the 'M' as their mark - they asked I keep that and make the typography more contemporary...
also - there's another logo comp in the Look & Feel itself that's not included in the list of logos
here's an initial Look & Feel - needs content of course:
- dinky0
i like the type of the first and logo mark being enclosed in the box..
so put the box on the left and its gold
but sure about the site..
i feel that the logo should stay at top...
and make it bigger
- johndiggity0
i like how you labeled them so i can provide criticism easily.
- g3kk0k1d0
the 1st or 15
- johndiggity0
that being said, i like the versions with the all caps extended face, the line they creat contrasts nicely to the jumps in the slashes, and it helps to ground the mark a bit.
the only problem i see is with the mark and the funding & services tag. the 3 slashes are not forming a visual rythym with the 2 words. maybe try all 3 on one line, or each on it's own line:
markour funding & investments
markour
funding
& investmentstry playing around more so the relationship is more defined.
- PonyBoy0
Enter response:
refresh - numbers on the logos now... sorry. :)
- monNom0
v1.
makes me feel like giving them my money.
- Propaganda0
1 or 13
- Nairn0
1 or 14/15, but i don't like those ampersands..
- Crouwel0
1,15 or 20.
work a bit on 20, it has potential.
- mynx0
Add more blurs, rainbow gradients.. oh and make the logo bigger!
- lvl_130
1 is quite nice
- toe_knee0
1 is my favourite... and yours too seeing as you put it first..
- JerseyRaindog0
Definitely 20. It has the most gravitas.
- tekno0
1, 20, 5, 9, 13
- magicpatch0
dude, come on