logorly crit
logorly crit
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- johndiggity0
that being said, i like the versions with the all caps extended face, the line they creat contrasts nicely to the jumps in the slashes, and it helps to ground the mark a bit.
the only problem i see is with the mark and the funding & services tag. the 3 slashes are not forming a visual rythym with the 2 words. maybe try all 3 on one line, or each on it's own line:
markour funding & investments
markour
funding
& investmentstry playing around more so the relationship is more defined.