site layout crit
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- foreverwhatever
hey guys. I'm still working on my portfolio site, and i think i've finally designed a layout i like. Its influenced by swiss style if you can or cannot tell.
anyways let me know what you think.
http://www.foreverwhatever.fasth…
- foreverwhatever0
oh yeah, please ignore the ugly banner at the top, thats part of the free hosts shite.
- hiten0
needs space.
- fresnobob0
IF you are going for the international typographic style please make your grid more mathematical and even and utilize only san serif typefaces, unless where appropriate and completley objective photography
- monNom0
needs more gutter.
looks a bit messy ATM
- ********0
yes need more room all around.
certain work shouldnt be part of ur portfolio
- jevad0
more whitespace + more grid + better typography = +1
- funkage0
looks a little cramped. my eyes don't know where to go. maybe it's just me. the guys above have probably said it all.
a small sidetrack here: why did i get adult friend finder from one of your links? haha.
- foreverwhatever0
man, its the cheap free hosting, its like porn. thanks for all the crits guys. i understand sans-serif is int. style, but i just think that georgia is easily the best looking display font. as far as more white space goes though, i mean where should it go?
- Seff0
i clicked on the original link and got a pic of some dudes dorm room.
then i click on any link in the above menu and i get a page with bleached blondes in their pannies who are avvailable for a date in my zip code..
skip a meal and spend it on some decent hosting my man
- foreverwhatever0
duh,
- foreverwhatever0
its free hosting, im just testing, im not dedicating myself to anything until i build up a decent amount of work, and i have a good site.
- ********0
WHAT TEH F**
i click on your works and i get giant AdultFriendFinder ads..
are you spamming this place??
wtf
- Mouzer0
I like the fact that most of your work is for Adult friend finder do you get to sample any of the friends? :)
- Dancer0
Waaaaay to cramped!!
Bit like your work space in the pic below. How the hell can you work on that desk?
- foreverwhatever0
its not easy.
and its like i said before, all the links to my work are dead, because i havent uploaded any.
and web1000 is like a porno hosting service... so...
whatever dont click the work links
- kyl30
classy
- zerofour0
I'm sure we will have alot of new friends after visiting your site... :)
- jaylarson0
the links, when rolled over, become white like the background, losing the user for a split second.... this i don't recommend
sans serif fonts work best when there are many links. georgia is best for copy.
needs more content...
even when i scroll below the advert image, things look cluttered and unorganized...
- canuck0
Excellent! I just got a date for tonight. Thanks mang!!!
- asprin0
Haha...I like how the site is not ready, the links are dead but you want it to be critqued. You've got too much going on and regardless of the design being finished or not, you need to get some legit hosting. It's not that expensive man, invest in yourself.