Card Crit
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- ********0
I don't have the illy file here at work with me, but as a quick bodge to the jpeg, I've been trying to make the eye more like a speaker cone. The outside eye shape would obviously need changed.
Thoughts?
- Baskerville0
hmmm, maybe the second one is a tad too far, for me.
- ********0
Yeah, my thoughts also. The first one is still too subtle though.
Having said that, when I do the site, i'm going to make the fucker bounce, so if you don't see it on the card, you should pick it up from there.
- kelpie0
hmmm
- chossy0
I like the second one if you only do two drops instead of four.
- Dancer0
I love the subtlety.
Keep it.
Could work squire
- chossy0
to me also the perspective of the speaker seems to be out of whack, but I often get this wrong, In my opinion the drops on the bottom should be rotated 45 degrees counter clockwise'ish?? and tinkered about with inorder to get the right perspective, like I said I get this wrong sometimes so make of it what you like.
- kelpie0
mmm hmm
agreed
- kelpie0
(with dancer)
the least speakery the better I reckon. If it bounces on the site that'll be more than enough...
- chossy0
I mailed you skt my man.
- paraselene0
chossy you never ruin it you only enhance it. i take a smallish mouse-sized mickey from time to time because you are one of my favoured ones. it's good for morale.
as for this card, i like the first speaker treatment and think the bouncing on the site will be more than enough to make the point.
i don't mind that typeface, nor do i mind the polarised justification. i would like to see a lighter line on the actual numbers and addresses and a mild kerning tweak on the names.
the illustration is lovely and i think a rich chocolate brown will look gorgeous. plus, you've got good taste in stock, so i reckon it'll have a luxurious feel to it that will nicely counterpoint the cleanliness of the other elements.
- kelpie0
I've decided on reflection that it's pish btw. just sayin.
- mr_snuggles0
I still like the first best, but that extra sapce after the phone # is still there :)
- ********0
I still like the first best, but that extra sapce after the phone # is still there :)
mr_snuggles
(Jan 13 06, 07:07)Thats just photoshop being a cunt. It will not be there when I set it up for print.
And cheers for the email chossy, I'm going to stick with having it in perspective though. What's throwing it just now is the main shape of the eye. But I can't fix that until I get home and have access to the illy file.
Thanks for all the comments people, esp mr baskerville for the speaker idea. Have yourselves a grand weekend*.
*Except you Kelpie, I hope you get chibbed.
- chossy0
no worries skt, I will chib kelpie for you don't you worry.
hey kelpie wanna meet for a drink this weekend I have a mad drouth on.
- kelpie0
pffft, give a guy some constructive advice and he goes and wishes maiming on you. this worlds going to shit.
- kelpie0
haha chossy.
- paraselene0
must you be a buftie to chib or be chibbed? oooh, kelpie the horse bufty.
- paraselene0
haha. check it now you can sue me.
- chossy0
no paraselene you have to be cut witha knife to be chibbed, and is that a little dig for me accusing you of havving a wee boaby eh? just a tiny pinger a wee semi?.