Card Crit
Card Crit
Out of context: Reply #51
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- paraselene0
chossy you never ruin it you only enhance it. i take a smallish mouse-sized mickey from time to time because you are one of my favoured ones. it's good for morale.
as for this card, i like the first speaker treatment and think the bouncing on the site will be more than enough to make the point.
i don't mind that typeface, nor do i mind the polarised justification. i would like to see a lighter line on the actual numbers and addresses and a mild kerning tweak on the names.
the illustration is lovely and i think a rich chocolate brown will look gorgeous. plus, you've got good taste in stock, so i reckon it'll have a luxurious feel to it that will nicely counterpoint the cleanliness of the other elements.