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- deadpixels
Hi NT people, can you tell me what you think of this particular design. Be easy, I'm a bit nervous, I'm a newstoday work putter upper virgin, but I think i'm ready, and I want the first time to be with you. http://www.designshowcase.co.uk/…
- kyl30
needs more brown and use the corn filter!
- ********0
super nice
- kyl30
nice typeface
- deadpixels0
more brown and corn? Is that because it says poo, yeah I need to take another shot I think, meant to say pod with the d wrapping around the other side
- kyl30
that was my friday afternoon smartass comment to 'crit my shit', sorry. just waiting for the five o'clock bell here...
- canuck0
Nice. But I would never buy such a thing.
- bradpitt0
beautiful.
- Pindawg0
i like it
- digitalswarm0
I would buy that shit... Make the container rice paper, and I'd eat it on the way home. Then I'd blaze and go buy a dozen of them. That's what I want, and you have to do it.
- deadpixels0
Cheers for the feedback everybody
- 5timuli0
Shit? No. KILL KILL KILL!
- Jnr_Madison0
Nice work.
- Nairn0
Nice concept.
I hope it's realised in an environmentally friendly fashion though - there's potential for lots of waste!
- jamble0
give your page a title!
- digitalswarm0
Clean up the copy.
Pod food
A brand and packaging solution for an upstart company that provides freshly preparded healthy ingredients which time poor people will be able to pick up at kiosks situated at train stations and other commuter hotspots; take home; and turn into a great meal in just 10 minutes.
- deadpixels0
I was trying to be environmentally friendly aware, the menus printed on the container. And there is not alot of material that doesn't have a purpose. The whole thing flats out on to a thin card roughly A3+
- digitalswarm0
I want this thing done and on my desk tomorrow morning.
- Nairn0
cool. but how are you going to ensure seperation between the various pods - if you have meat or dairy or veggies, you'll have seperate within the tube and presumably the tube itself will have to be made with a plastic laminate for hygiene. that points to around 7 seperate potentially non-biodegradable elements.
if it's all made from recyclables and corn-starch, that's cool - but those things cost a lot, which maybe isn't a problem with the demographic you're targetting.
not trying to knock you at all - i really love the piece, and see it as a better solution to the innumerate plastic items gracing our shelves currently.
blart
- deadpixels0
Yo Nairn
I was thinking the audience would be cash-rich time-poor city types so i think fuck it give them a pretentious little bag to carry around
- mayo0
please either hyphenate time-poor or use different wording like "people who are short on time." it took me a second to read "time poor people" and realize it wasn't a typo.