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- digitalswarm0
What he said.
- Nairn0
yeah, what mayo said.
first time i read it, i misinterpreted and thought you were offering some outreach for 'poor' people. which ..er.. didn't sound right! :)
- digitalswarm0
Yeah, I don't like poor people either.
- shplashtik0
ditto
- jevad0
I wanted to tear you a new one...but that's fucking awesome mate
- redFridge0
there are little fruit cups that sell at starbucks with this name and similar logo. "pod"
so watch out for that one.
- Woolhouse0
Your type choices seem nice.
Although I was hoping to see more work.I'd rather see candy corns or something rather then mushrooms tumble out of this product.
Mushrooms yick,, bleck!
- inhaler0
nice job there...
make me wonder about the amount of food that would go in one of those cups, and would it be with the small meal.
I like tho.
- Breast0
Can't you just fill it with premade sushi instead?
- shplashtik0
would the food inside go bad if left "on the shelf" too long, I mean wherever it will be sold from.
- rasko40
Sainsbury's already do this actually.
Your product looks kinda nice, but when you look past the superficial and consider it properly it falls down in number of aspects. I actually despise products like this, its an utterly disgraceful waste of packaging and a complete ripoff but that aside lets continue.
You do not show POS which I think is ESSENTIAL with a product like this.
I cannot see what I am buying, unless I am buying a big curly typeface.
Are you only offering one recipe? Is this a vegetarian option?
You say this is a lamb recipe, so, is there lamb contained within this packaging? If so - how are you going to hang the product? How does the POS work now - do you have a special fridge? If not - so, I am basically buying a recipe and some chopped mushrooms and peppers?
And I can still not see my food!! Sorry but many people will not attempt to cook something if they cannot see what it will/should look like! What am I buying?
Why are you advertising a typeface with that alphabet image?
Why in your picture does it say pan fried lamb with peppers and mint and you have a piece of broccoli on there? Does it not make sense to have a pepper or some mint?!
I like your packaging but I think I am buying tennis balls not food, when I am buying food I am buying food, I am not buying fancy packaging and unless this food is ready to eat then I want to see what it is, and I want to know what other options are available and I want to know if it is vegetarian etc etc etc. Sorry but this is wide open, put some tennis balls in there and hang that up in a sports shop and you're ready to go.
Either that or do some serious rethinking. nicely presented mind you.
- eficks0
I got into trouble last time for asking someone to crit my shite.
- rasko40
but you did actually post pics of your faeces no?
- visualplane0
Nice photos. What kind of camera did you use?
- Nairn0
oh.
Your 3rd picture down looks like it reads 'poo'. I've just noticed.
Hmm.. Poo in a tube? There's a stocking-filler!
*digs out brown cardboard tubes and address book..
- Nairn0
oh.
I've just noticed that you'd already noticed.
* laughs awkwardly at self, turns off computer and poos into tubes.
- rasko40
yeah that could be a problem when shopping for food, people may not really look twice at buying something that they thought said "poo"
then again, they may have thought they were buying some shoes:
- davi-t0
its says "poo" !!!
hahahahaha.
- ********0
cool
- Soler0
I can't see the text layout to know if that's good or not