Quickie site check
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- jevad
salut mes petites chous!
Before I send this:
off to the client for initial feedback I though I'd run it past you all-knowing and seeing design 'experts' for some feedback - negative or positive...I welcome it all.
grassy-ass.
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- unknown0
pretty plain and all but I guess its suitable.. the green text on the right looks a bit small parhaps for the target (older?).
Id maybe make the text on the buttons a bit darker - on a mac laptop here so maybe I'm lighter?
looks like an ok simple site, probably just what they want.
happy bday btw :)
- Bluejam0
Layout, structure, style and design are all spot on.
I'm having trouble reading the type, especially the navigation. It needs to be bolder. Also, are there supposed to be rollovers on the buttoms when on that page, ie home button appears on the home page.
The logo seems a little lost on some of the page headers, same with the company name...break them out of the image area?
Lastly, the contact info, right side, again seems too small.
Other than that good job.
- jevad0
thanks rasko : )
yeah - it's bloody plain isn't it - but thats what they asked for - they already signed the visual comps off and they're happy with how it looks...I think I will probably change the small contact text...you're right about it being too small...
If one more person mentions making the menu text darker I'll do that too ;)
thanks again mate
- jevad0
blue,
thanks for your comments - i was worried about the logo on a couple of those pics, and now that you've mentioned the menu too I'll have to look into that..
"are there supposed to be rollovers on the buttoms when on that page" - not at first - but I forgot to take one out and actually liked how it works - cause it comes up with the darker rollover button - does it just look whack - did it confuse you?
- Bluejam0
"does it just look whack - did it confuse you? "
It might be confusing. It certainly doesn't look whack.
- unknown0
yeah just noticed that on the buttons - I'd ditch that personally. Good points on the logo too, I wonder if you can put a subtle semi transparent layer under the logos that appear over images - the for sale page header is purfick on that score.
- unknown0
2 comments i would use a differnt pixel font on the left
And there needs to be some type of header with in the first part of the main text right now it seems like all the body text is floating with no anchor at the top.
So right above Fireland Managent Bold text I would Maybe put like a Larger "Quote" in quotes to start it off ... like a 14-16 size font in Times New Roman Quote marks
- Carty0
on 1024x res and a smaller monitor [15"] you have to scroll... but really you dont cause you arent missing any info... i know most have bigger screens.. just wondering if its a necessary scroll.
- freshmode0
Here you go..
The structure is ok. Could be better but is still ok.
I don't like the colors. It looks really bland and boring. I would choose something a bit stronger to make up for the lack of content.
The landing page doesn't look like a home page. It looks more like you landed within the site. I would make the landing page more about options then information off the bat.
The logo is lost in the header. It already looks a bit boring so I would leave it on it's own.
The navigation is to lite. Bolder font and darker colors.
I don't like the font being used. It makes it harder to read with the color you use.
The box on the right had side looks out of place. It looks as if you grabed it from another site and just dropped it in.
Your other work is so much better. Looks like the client won this batter.
I think the major problem is the look. The structure works. The look is lacking.
hope that helps or if not, it was fun commenting.
FRESH!