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- Melanie23
Working on an identity for a client. I'm pretty happy about where these two options are going.
- I like the slice line through the top one.PhanLo
- for me, definitely option arzu-rzu
- yup no 1 winsrenderedred
- I like both but think first definitely stronger of the two. Nice workdee-dubs
- first option, but this was like done a millions times before http://chipchickcom.…grafician
- Yeah, the first one for sure. I love that slice.CyBrainX
- Option aSlashPeckham
- align 1 is perfect.
Killed.
Billed.
*thumbsup*ideaist - Tastyscarabin
- What does 'Align' do?Morning_star
- The top one is good, but the angle at the bottom of the 'a' throws it off imhodkoblesky
- Top one: brilliant.
Bottom one: my brain automatically processes as saying, 'ailing'.Continuity - what dkoblesky said. you could correct correct the a in option 1oey_oey
- A because I would have no idea what's going on if I was only shown B.garbage
- 1DRIFTMONKEY
- @continuity - totally! I didn't see that at all.Melanie
- Bottom one starts to make good on the name “align” but is tough to get - top is a nice piece of design work, but leaves me wondering if it has a concept.ben_
- do you have variations of the second? First reminds me of salome stencil https://www.atipofou…imbecile
- The first one is beautiful. But it also looks like other identities I’ve seen. It could be fashion. It could be tech. The second one is more interesting.monospaced
- I agree, I've seen the top one several places. I love it, though, and see no reason not to pursue it. Maybe play with the a and n?formed
- NICEAQUTE
- Both look great! 1 looks better, but I'm with morning star and would like to know what align does.bezoar
- I wonder if you could use the concept for no.2 to create single word headlines on ads..SlashPeckham
- ^ It'd be tough. A headline needs to be read fast, so a concept like this might be a bit to much of a barrier to entry for the reader.Continuity
- *too muchContinuity
- Not A, that's slant or cut, not align. Idea of B is a start, what you need is a line that the letters are 'aligning' too. Like the align icons in AI, PS etc.shapesalad
- In A, the a is not aligning at the bottom, the stroke on the right needs to end flat, creating a horizontal line.shapesalad
- Yeah as nice as it looks I don't get "align" out of the first one. Depending on what align means of courseyuekit
- No 2sandpipe
- Love the first one.Chimp
- I agree that the first option is move cut/angle rather than align. How about something modular like this for the second:BaskerviIle
- https://i.imgur.com/…BaskerviIle
- These notes deliver.ideaist
- first one is made by the cut blob above the g. love it.hans_glib
- A is beautiful. Congrats.nbq
- But I agree, I would fix the a's basenbq
- I love how @Melanie has abandoned QBN as girl #2. We hardly knew ye!ideaist
- Thanks for the feedback!Melanie
- Memetically, the visual details in A instantly describe 'align' rather than imply cut, or whatever. Don't fret it. A, is lovely. Love it and give it.Nairn