Logo-ish crit

Out of context: Reply #6

• Started
• Last post
• 14 Responses

• detritus0

  Kind of agree with the font quibbles - shouldn't you use an 'American' font with the mark?

  Is the mark supposed to be a spring? If it is, I'd play with the bottom bit a little, if it's not - I'd leave it as it is.

  The shading top and bottom are different though - red gradient is non-existent compared to blue, and they're both at slightly different angles?

  I like where it's going though.

  detritus 0Permalink

  UpvoteDownvote

  Flag

  • good feedback. I agree completely.gramme
  • I dont think it's a spring. i got more of a temperature rising/cooling feel from it.tasty
  • I agree I didn't take it as literal as a spring... more of hot and cold air swirling.SoupCan
  • yes!OSFA

  Show [[ numHiddenNotes ]] more notesAdd Note

  SaveCancel

View thread