akrok design - portfolio review
- Started 11 years ago
- Last post 11 years ago
- 28 Responses
- ********0
Why shadowbox if there's not any other views? Right click/ new tab on the magnifying glass doesn't do anything.
The renders of the cans can be like that, but that cheesy background ruins it. Why a wood floor? Just put it on solid white or black.
Why so many camera and laptop ads? They're all the same.
Why that strange sketch that wasn't retouched? Lose that.
Why aren't the social media icons and copyright aligned with the menu options?
- 20020
If your audience is people who use macs, make sure this is retina ready.
80% of portfolio gets viewed by an ipad first.*
- summs0
On your about page I really like that image that's being used and it has a nice lifestyle feel to it. I'd consider whiting out the license plate instead of blurring it (reminds me of the show cops or something).
I also don't understand the text rotating from "create good stuff" to "create better stuff" which one is it?
- akrok0
all good and valid points. thank you!
- ********0
Why are the gummy vitamins separated into two thumbnail sections? They are just variations of the same one design.
The repeats get confusing. Consolidating them will make the projects stronger. Branding (slide 1) > jar (slide 2) > jar variations (slide 3).
Revise your resume design.
- what's wrong with the resume? only suggestion i got was to add a summery.akrok
- Update the design to match your new site.********
- reanimate0
Why does the site take so long to load? it's only about a dozen images.
Why are there two pictures of the vitamins and hand cream when the same product is in both?
Why so many pictures of your cars?
