Cosmochoria Kickstarter
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- mantrakid
Would you guys be willing to give me a critique on this kickstarter page I've been working on? It's prepping to go live April 1st... I'd love to know what you think about the tone / video / layout / presentation / rewards tiers.. Any advice you can give would be a huge help.
https://www.kickstarter.com/proj…
Thank you!!
- MHDC0
I'll crit the vid.
Backround music is distracting, its just a bit too loud so it overpowers your voice. You should say a whole lot less. You adjectived the fuck out of every sentence, just doesn't need to be said that way if your kinda showing it at the same time. The pixel character you made for yourself conflicts with the aesthetic that you created in the game. Its distracting.Edit it down. Doesn't need to be that long.
I wish you the best of luck, think its pretty great you made that. I'll have to give it a try.
- thanks man, i get what you're saying. You should have seen how conflicting my real HD ugly mug was....mantrakid
- microkorg0
Good luck with the Kickstarter!
Most important thing to have is a gameplan for your whole campaign. When to seed press/blogs etc, updates to your Kickstarter page (updated videos to show developments).
Went to a great talk a month or so by a company that raised nearly half a million on Kickstarter - was really interesting hearing about their strategy of the campaign.
- thanks man, yeah i've been mapping out the month basically so theres stuff to show through the campaignmantrakid
- cbass990
I think with the amount of content and thought behind this idea, people will buy into it. I bet you go over your goal. Excited to see this launch. Good luck.
- mantrakid0
Thanks, homie. this feels like one of those pivotal life moments.
- Weyland0
music and artwork is superb, looks solid, good luck man
- inteliboy0
love it. looks like such a huge amount of work.
I think the thing that geeks n gamers are going to love and what will give this attention is the exploration... the freedom and fun of flying through space and landing on planets. Maybe highlight that a bit more. It's like a take on mario galaxy, which was massive.
music at 1:10 - 1:30 is like a bad dream. maybe dial that bit down?
also what platforms? wasn't sure... though did read it under the video. Could be worth mentioning you are aiming to get it on steam, PS4, app store - I'm guessing distribution takes even more time and money, so the funding will help that a huge amount so people can actually play the game.
i like the idea of a pixel version of you... though agreed that it is a bit confusing. Maybe you could put him on your desk? so the background is photograhic/video?
like this:- OH man, teeny little super guy. I dont think i have enuf time to pull that off before the launch... shit. would be killermantrakid
- Thank you so much for the insight. Music at 1:10 is my fav part! I never got a 'bad' vibe so thats so interesting to hearmantrakid
- PLatforms are mac/pc/linux at this point. more if i hit stretch goals, but its a big job so $$$mantrakid
- atomholc0
nice man!
- mantrakid0
sorry didnt know if i should post this here too since that's the name of the thread... fuck caution, i erred on the side of SPAM!!
https://www.kickstarter.com/proj…
hugs.
- jtb260
Backed. Good luck man.
- mantrakid0
You rock, dude -- thanks so much for having my back on this, it means a lot. <3
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I think I'm going to keep this thread the 'live' one, and let the other one sink.. I'll save that one for more development type updates.
- mantrakid0
https://www.kickstarter.com/proj…
WOOP WOOP
Over 25% backed in the first day... epic shit yall, it doesnt say who but it does say some of that came from QBN -- i am forever in your debt, homies.
- GeorgesIV0
That is so awesome, I'm happy to see your dream go through,
will spam my friends for you :)
- mantrakid0
$9 away from $4,000 - what a weekend, y'all. :) Huge love for your support guys. :)
- lodef0
there you go I got you to 4k, I hope it works out. looking forward to it.
- mantrakid0
Lodef you're the man. Thanks so much homie! I gotta make a QBN planet or something. :D