Cosmochoria Kickstarter

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    I'll crit the vid.
    Backround music is distracting, its just a bit too loud so it overpowers your voice. You should say a whole lot less. You adjectived the fuck out of every sentence, just doesn't need to be said that way if your kinda showing it at the same time. The pixel character you made for yourself conflicts with the aesthetic that you created in the game. Its distracting.

    Edit it down. Doesn't need to be that long.

    I wish you the best of luck, think its pretty great you made that. I'll have to give it a try.

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    • thanks man, i get what you're saying. You should have seen how conflicting my real HD ugly mug was....mantrakid
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