late night logotype crit
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- akrok0
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- Amicus0
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- epigraph0
It's showing up for me. How's that possible?
- ********0
kerning is about 8/10
- thats what I was getting on that kerning game too, lol =)
epigraph
- thats what I was getting on that kerning game too, lol =)
- Amicus0
I would loosen the YA a touch and ROY a touch more. That E also looks like it needs a little love... perhaps shortening the mid bar a touch and also raising it a fraction (not as high as Neutraface 2).
- So that's three touches, and one fractional adjustment.shapeaspect
- akrok0
if you go any smaller, the bow will be pretty much gone. right?
- Amicus0
maybe just exaggerate the bow a little. Sharpen up the corners – especially the inside ones – so it fits with the rest of the logo better.
- CanHasQBN0
I would make the crossbars on the R, A, and E the same height.
- thisRavdyk
- either the E midbar looked too close to the base or crossbar on A looked too highepigraph
- meh, I don't think somonospaced
- akrok0
- fyi. no kerning here.akrok
- same logo. just added a tagline™akrok
- me likey with the tagline
- gives it heaps of personalityalicetheblue
- monospaced0
I think you can shift the A over to the right a hair and you're good. Possibly move out the R to the left a touch. I really like the mark.
- epigraph0
^^ thanks this is basically what I ended up doing. Made the R a smidge wider too.
- goldieboy0
The crown looks like a crown of a queen and not a king. The bow tie doesn't match a queen.
- sabatizer0
yeah I'd go bow tie or crown, not both. Crown seems more appropriate.
- And make it a king crown, add more circle shapes. Switch the placement of little circles and big circles in crown.brandon_phillip