logo crit please
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- hektor9110
work on it a little bit more and then post it here....
- Crack_Junkie0
#1 is in the right direction, but I don't like the treatment of the valve. It seems out of proportion?
- UKV0
The idea is there, but its quite small. Feels like you could turn all the type into pipes and get a bit more thump.
- Fax_Benson0
I'd say too much first aid, not enough plumbers. The tap is tiny.
- 74LEO0
bottom right "I" looks thicker in FIRST AID
- capn_ron0
what these guys all said.
The tap is too small for the red cross. the propoetions need to be worked on. Is there anyway to incorporate the cross and valve into the type to make the whole thing work together better?
- dirtydesign0
looks like u just started. needs exploration.
maybe make that + look more like piping.
- leftwave0
- that plus sign can replace the t in FIRST and be more pipe-like i think.capn_ron
- doesnt look like plumbing to medirtydesign
- I think like others are saying, this is a decent solution, but there is a lot of potential for a more creative solutionrodzilla
- CygnusZero40
I think it would look better if the plus was solid. It would make the logo feel stronger, and have the height of the horizontal bar the same as the height of the letters.
- dbloc0
^ That valve doesn't work with the cross. It looks like you just slapped a valve on a cross. You need to make them work together. I think giving the cross a slight pipe look will do it. Don't overdo it though. Just slight divets on the edges.
- dbloc0
also maybe make the valve be the top of the cross instead of having it extend beyond the cross formation.
- dbloc0
all you did was fill in the cross!? Come on...try to be a little more creative. This could easily be two pieces of clip art put together.
- moniker0
Close Photoshop, turn off your computer.
grab a pad and pencil and crawl under your sink at home.
Don't come out until you have a new idea.
- sofakingbanned0
I would switch from red. The red cross is pretty set on being medical. you dont want that kinda confusion...
use blue maybe???
- Yes the first thing that came to mind was Red Cross.utopian