Logo thoughts?
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- 74LEO0
se - needs some cleanup where they join.
What did the original line up look like?
Is this a final of 3 to 5 variations that they picked?
- umbee540
maybe try "actionable...infrastructure" in caps and kern the letters to give them a little spacing. i think servnation is approachable with the lowercase. caps on the bottom will balance it out... in my opinion
- questine0
you call this design? looks like an average template.
look at contemporary design, get inspired man.
- monNom0
idea first. then worry about application.
it looks like you skipped step 1
- formula0
um, this is pretty dated and pretty generic. instantly forgettable at best.
- i_monk0
I don't get the SE ligature at all.
It's really dull.
- 74LEO0
Why not develop a logo? This seems like a type treatment.
Use the (sn) for a logo/icon then a nice type treatment for servnation that will read small under the icon/logo
- dirtydesign0
got a 1995 feel
- Amicus0
something like Geogrotesque could work well for this
- detritus0
Holy fuck—Swollenelbow? Wow. There's a blast from the past name!
Not feeling the logo at all, I'm afraid—just looks like an average nondescript techie font written out. Neither it nor the tagline tell me anything useful about the company. Even at the business card stage, I still have no idea what 'servnation' does or represents.
- SoulFly0
too safe...
make it pop
- ksv1230
if you connect the se, you need to connect some others. just seems strange to only have the se connected
- the font is not too good, there's nothing else that can connect very wellSoulFly
- You're right!swollenelbow
- bjladams0
the letters don't seem to fit well- some are smooth and others are too sharp.
- bjladams0
i read your website name as hell_on_ice_design
that has nothing to do with anything here though....
- SoulFly0
the red bands top and bottom need to be removed, if they are meant to be part of the logo, they are not being useful.
- swollenelbow0
Does the business card design help? haha http://grab.by/7tu3
- swollenelbow0
Hell is on ice! Thank you guys for being around and whipping people like me into shape.
- horton0
unnecessary "se" connect. looks silly. no purpose. just remove it completely.
- fiver0
keep the negative area on the front and the back of the cards consistent.
- Can you explain?swollenelbow
- one is longer than the other.crayz