Logo thoughts?
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- questine0
^ that took a whole night?
you DIDN'T put any thought in it. that took five min max.
- swollenelbow0
Guys, thank for the feedback both construction and the plain "you suck". Yes I was trying to improve that other logo. This was one night of messing around. Usually people are looking for the fastest solutions. They don't want to hear that you are trying to understand what they do and in turn use that for the design of their identity. I will try to get to them the right way. Thanks again.
- detritus0
Holy fuck—Swollenelbow? Wow. There's a blast from the past name!
Not feeling the logo at all, I'm afraid—just looks like an average nondescript techie font written out. Neither it nor the tagline tell me anything useful about the company. Even at the business card stage, I still have no idea what 'servnation' does or represents.
- Amicus0
something like Geogrotesque could work well for this
- dirtydesign0
got a 1995 feel
- 74LEO0
Why not develop a logo? This seems like a type treatment.
Use the (sn) for a logo/icon then a nice type treatment for servnation that will read small under the icon/logo
- i_monk0
I don't get the SE ligature at all.
It's really dull.
- umbee540
maybe try "actionable...infrastructure" in caps and kern the letters to give them a little spacing. i think servnation is approachable with the lowercase. caps on the bottom will balance it out... in my opinion
- 74LEO0
se - needs some cleanup where they join.
What did the original line up look like?
Is this a final of 3 to 5 variations that they picked?
- Projectile0
go get some inspiration, and rethink it.
- Mr_Right0
I feel asleep a little looking at it.
- orrinward0
Very forgettable. Also, watch your kerning. Why is the second n excluded from the group?
- formula0
um, this is pretty dated and pretty generic. instantly forgettable at best.
- monNom0
idea first. then worry about application.
it looks like you skipped step 1
- questine0
you call this design? looks like an average template.
look at contemporary design, get inspired man.
- dbloc0
the se look awkward
- fiver0
keep the negative area on the front and the back of the cards consistent.
- Can you explain?swollenelbow
- one is longer than the other.crayz
- horton0
unnecessary "se" connect. looks silly. no purpose. just remove it completely.
- swollenelbow0
Hell is on ice! Thank you guys for being around and whipping people like me into shape.