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- scarabin0
it bothers me that only the G and the final O have that drop shadow thing on it. i feel like you should do them all or none of them
- set0
Its very nice although the 'G' , the 'el' and the '80|81' really don't fit.
- I agree about the G. Perhaps try some other approaches.luckyorphan
- doesnotexist0
look at the negative space between letters- like the tr/gab area and the a/va. some weird happenings.
- doesnotexist0
that ligature coming off the 'b' is weird
- agree, should kill it. lovely mark thoBonSeff
- very nice yesdoesnotexist
- Amicus0
Love the overall direction of this. What's the context?
The G doesn't fit with the rest so well. The 's' is looking better but maybe too tall. The 'r' needs to sit on the baseline like the original.
'el' looks too much like 'ef' and the '80|81' is too small. I agree with those who say you need to delete the 'G' and 'o' drop shadow thingamajig.
I love the style of the 'm' swash and maybe you could tweak it slightly and use a similar style of curve for the other swashes. I think its the more abrupt turns and the come and go I'm liking.
- dbloc0
what is it?
- bigtrickagain0
it looks pretty damn good...
small points:
- the r in Gastronomo looks like it's floating in the middle of nowhere
- is vagabundo supposed to be uncapitalized? I'm not sure - the 'v' looks slightly bigtger than the other letters, yet it is too small to be uppercase
- the award-sticker black circle thing behind 'el' looks out of place with the rest of the design, but maybe it fits with the rest of their identity package
- the curve connecting the b and u in vagabundo - i don't like that awkward kink in itbut no, it's really nice (:
- CALLES0
i like
- bored2death0
I wasn't sure if it was "ef" or "el".
- orrinward0
I bloody love it. I don;t like the 'el' or the '80|81' bit though. 'el' is hard to make out and the '80|81' doesn't tie in well.
I'd maybe consider making the bottom of the glyphs fit the curves under the n tighter, especially with the gAb and the DO.
Looks really nice though! Me likey!
- bored2death0
I like the way the line creates dimension on the last "o". I don't think it works as well on the capital "G".
- tasty0
is this for tampons?
- grymes0
Just to say it. I dont think the depth thing you have going on the 'G' and final 'o' are working nor necessary.
- SteveJobs0
The Vagabond Gastroenterologist
i like it
- bored2death0
The connecting swoosh on the "b" and the "u" is just awkward to me.
- i_monk0
bigtrickagain: R & BU - agreed; V is an issue, I don't want to push it (or -agabundo) too far down, and can't extend it any farther up, but I'll see what can be done.
bored2death: yeah, I've been trying different endings for the L, nothing seems right (or makes it even more like a script F); I see your point on the G, easily modified.
orrinwind: Inevitable. :)
Thanks all
- OSFA0
Very nice!! I like it a lot... minor tweakies...
- I'm not a huge fan of the Capital G... too much... clean it up a bit
- Ligatures could be smoother, play with them... I usually print and draw them until I am happy...
- lose the extra elements on the initial and final G and O
- n-m ligature needs some work, you have an extra peak there...
- definitely fix the L on 'el'... it does look like an FSee... minor stuff, but the logo is hot!
- awak0
Like it a lot also.
-the 'el' definitely 'ef' now. Would there be any point on the 'el' styled like the swirly thing starting above the gastronomo's first o?
-the capital G looks like it is from another style. Clean it up or extend one of the swirls perhaps.
-would it destroy the n if the first stem would form an arc with the u? and then restyle the swirl a bit underneath...Good job anyways...hope to see the final outcome and the overall identity. Thumbs up!