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- HAYZ1LLA0
5 with less writing underneath
- RoyBoyII0
5 but type needs to be more a more prominent colour..
- luckyorphan0
4 does it for me, but I would have to agree that the color palette could use a little pushing. As you're seeing here, on white, the image tends to ghost abit and become hard to read. 5 is nice as well, and you can see how a more saturated color (the silhouette) comes forward and pushes the text back even further.
- monospaced0
I think you have something interesting going on in 6.
Is this women only or something?
- dirtydesign0
cant really see whats going on with these, but i'm diggin 4 and 6.
def try em in black and white first.
- evanburke0
Yeah do not go with #5, silhouettes = corny.
#1 and #6 are both pretty interesting. I like them. I'd like to see you try some of the other logotypes as the text inside the bubbles for #1.
#4 is the safe choice, but also a bit boring. It's a solid logotype.
- I'm glad people started speaking up on 5. I didn't like it. Client request.dubbya
- dubbya0
Sorry first post like this, I bumped up the linked file so it should be easier to read when clicked.
Thanks for the good feedback. I agree with the color, curvy comments but for this particular client the pallet suits them well. I'll definitely bump up the saturation.
- inkpink0
yes i'd def like to see the #2 tilde applied to #4 italic font.
my 2 cents.
- iCanHasQBN0
4.
- iCanHasQBN0
4.
- gramme0
Six is the only one that I see having any promise, but it's not really blowing my hair back either. The rest are bland, and devoid of concept (OK, #5 has a concept but not a great one). The italic fonts in 4–5 are your best effort in terms of type.
I suggest further research into the meaning of renewal and rejuvenation. Surely there's a rich lode of symbology that you can glean from.
Agree with what others said re: color.
- SoulFly0
With exception of #1, they are all pretty much the same logo in my point of view.
I believe #1 will "transpire" (get it? transpire) better in the overall woman's training surrounding. I can definitely see that #1 logo on some chicks t-shirt during aerobics class; printed in water-bottles or in wall motifs around the locker-room.
- dan100200z0
#1 is best
- Gucci0
Why not dress up a letter r and make it feel lovingly hand drawn, feminine etc? Might also be interesting for the possibilities not related to fitness. Anyhoo... just a thought to break you out of a mould. Plus, it's not terribly cliche for women's fitness.
Other than that, I think #s 1 and 6 are most promising.
- whatsup0
#1 There's something interesting about how the shapes work together here but meaningless. All that mini-type is useless for a logo.
#4 is straight forward and clean/ boring
#5 I like the iconic symbol, but the type does not go with if you remove the fine print.
#6 would be good for organic food.I would think about mixing #4 and #5 together. definitely scrap the rest. Definitely darken these color shades.
- mynameisdave0
4 with something similar to the swirly icon from 2. Swirly icon needs developed a bit more.
And the colors are horrible. I can barely read the green text. Saturation needs pushed up in everything.
- pixelinc0
gramme's on the money here - need more relevance - time for a bit of thesaurus action.
Main Entry: renew
Part of Speech: verb
Definition: start over; refurbish
Synonyms:
begin again, brace, breathe new life into, bring up to date, continue, exhilarate, extend, fix up, freshen, gentrify, go over, mend, modernize, overhaul, prolong, reaffirm, reawaken, recommence, recondition, recreate, reestablish, refit, refresh, regenerate, rehabilitate, reinvigorate, rejuvenate, remodel, renovate, reopen, repair, repeat, replace, replenish, restate, restock, restore, resume, resuscitate, retread, revitalize, revive, spruce, stimulate, transform