My logo critque.....
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- version30
not so much
- version30
In all honesty though, if you do plan to use a scripted type for your "logo" you may want to use something that connects and has some personality, with both the a and e in Baker, you may want to look into a double story lower case a.'
i'm sure if gramme were here he would give you a list of expensive options half of which i would add to my ever filling cart :/
- ********0
i think you should use your first name.... so people know what to call you
- monNom0
I don't know if there's any saving it, but how about lowercase 'j' and the swash from the B dots the J ?
- blaw0
What's the typographic term for the leading piece of the 'r'? Now take that word and fill in the blank below.
Trim the ____ on the 'r'.
- janne760
i find the serif stylish and nice. does it fit your style of designing however? is it how you want to have clients perceive you when they do not know you and they can not decipher modern design tendencies, at the risk of being seen 'traditional' and possibly 'old fashioned'?
beware that the lot of the market out there wants to move forward and sees graphic design as a means to support their own vision on how to get where they want.
i am simply saying, does this give you the right image when moving into the head of someone ONLY worried with their own daily struggles?
trying to look special is not necessarily the same as touching a broad market...
just saying. goodluck though!
- utopian0
they are okay, i am not moved by the typeface or the logo