Logo Crit II
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- josimar0
btw having 3 d's in the ID and trying to add your so called 'hurricane' into one of them probably breaks about 8 rules of graphic design in itself. And then there's the font, the special effect, I think there's a bit of lens flare in there too.
- irrelevant0
- i think you should lose the glossy shit. :Dbaseline_shift
- agreeddirtydesign
- yepakrokdesign
- ukit0
Why are you determined to glue that d onto the mark? It doesn't go together.
WHY WHY WHY
- i think the client has something like that so he/she probably still want something similar.akrokdesign
- gramme0
I think you're trying to fit a round peg into a square hole. The letters are very angular, and then you're adding the hurricane shape which is curved. I recommend something like baseline_shift did above, but making all the letters rounder. As is, it's a near miss.
- And I agree w/ ukit. Grafting the shape onto a d is not working.gramme
- literally round vs square lolbaseline_shift
- Makes sense in a way though, this is exactly the kind of thing a client would ask for;)ukit
- jnnbugg0
#1 is the only one that works for me.
- dirtydesign0
the 'D' doesn't read by itself
- Bullitt0
cut the type in two (horizontally, on a 20 degree angle from top to bottom. like its been cut by a hattori hanzo
- Bullitt0
the type is good, the icon is unnecessary, there nothing deadly about it, sharpen the edges if your going to keep it.
- gramme0
Oh and I agree with lose the freaking gradient. Mein gott...
- iceberg0
the type is trying way too hard, which makes it boring in my eyes
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- NONEIS0
maybe use the mark as the a? it's the only character that remotely looks like the symbol...
- version30
i still do not like this at all
- monNom0
^ None on those work.
the type style is unique enough on it's own. Redraw the type and open it up a bit to improve legibility.
- attentionspan0
i just read what u wrote in other thread, this is better then what they have.
But you basicly gave them what they wanted, why didnt you make "heres yours idea - its shit" and heres mine and this is why it works blabla
- AngryMob0
FAAARRRT!
- FredMcWoozy0
I agree with baseline_shift if that means anything