Need comments, illustration
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- benfal99
Iam working on this since a couple hours now, can you give me your comments? iam feeling dizzy.
- utopian0
Looks really nice benfal, how about addding a little color to the logo...
- locustsloth0
i like the added color on the logo. And is there any way you can make more of a contrast between the suit and the fork-guy's hair? As it is, it runs into each other and it robs it of some sense of depth that it could otherwise have
- iam taking note of that, thanksbenfal99
- Otherwise i like it, by the way. The right balance of funny and darklocustsloth
- vsplus0
le mec en arriere plan pourrait etre traite en contre-jour. Ainsi, le costard disparaitrait (il n'est pas utile a la lecture) et le tronconneuse batteuse serait mise en valeur acoup de reflets bien places... dis-moi ce que tu en penses.
- benfal990
vsplus, tu veux dire que tu mettrais les vêtements du mec de derrière complètement noir, sauf la tronconneuse?
- vsplus0
Oui en noir, comme si la lumiere venait de derriere lui. C'est le principe des monstres dans les films bien fait, moins tu vois de details, plus tu flippes !!
- CGN0
Can you make the cake explode all over him?
- ninjasavant0
better than I could do.
- vsplus0
Ca me fait penser qu'un gateau qui serait coupé a la tronçonneuse serait vachement plus simple et visuellement efficace.
- benfal990
laisser tomber le personnage qui s'apprête à en manger?
- oui. M'enfin ce serait une seconde idee. Je me questionne sur l'interet du personnage, sur ce qu'il apporte.vsplus
- apporte au poster, a la petite histoire que ca raconte...vsplus
- en fait, le mec est sur le point de faire scier la tronche :Dbenfal99
- HHAAHahAHAHAH oui j'avais bien senti que ça allait mal finir :]vsplus
- monNom0
the composition is leaning to the right quite a bit. Try flipping horizontal in photoshop, you'll see it.
Should be easy to correct digitally. Maybe flip the character and move the chainsaw guy to the right (not flipped), that should break up the rightward lean.
what's it for?
- It's for a benefit for people who lean to the right too muchlocustsloth
- LOLbenfal99
- benfal990
thanks for the comment monNom, i will test that
- vsplus0
Peut-etre que le gatal peut etre personnifié (genre yeux et bouche) et etre apeuré :D
- benfal990
its for a group that present series of shorts movies in different festivals around the globe.
- benfal990
i did this one 2 or 3 years ago. I won some awards with it :)
- benfal990
but now its their 10th anniversary. they wanted something dark and funny. Client approved the idea before I build it.
- ismith0
After seeing the other one you did (which is super nice!), one thing is that the new one kind of runs into the edge... now I don't mean to say that you should just add a major vignette, but I do feel like it's missing something. The table is just too clean to be sitting there so close to the edges... I don't know, but maybe you get what I'm saying.
