Logo Crit (Art by Kiko)
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- dbloc0
[ BEGIN CRITIQUE]
- buzz0
- buzz0
- dbloc0
lose the line.
- vsplus0
i prefer the first one :]
- brains0
Definitely lose the line.
- buzz0
Thanks
- dbloc0
suppose to be a pencil or crayon?
- buzz0
Pencil
- doesnotexist0
kerning issues
- buzz0
Yes I know. I have left those little things till the end. It's only a rough
- Amicus0
I like where you are going with this, but yes, lose the line.
Is it going to be used in different colours????
- buzz0
- buzz0
Maybe more like this or something.
- ********0
I liked it when it wasn't fluorescent
- dbloc0
yea that green and yellow don't work good together...try maybe and yellow orange or just bright orange if you want to stick with pop colors
- ********0
I actually liked the line too.. although - I was obviously in the minority.
- buzz0
Yeah I didn't mean those exact colours. God I need sleep it's too late here.
- buzz0
I like the idea of the pencil drawing something, but something maybe more interesting than a line. I thought that this could change depending on it's usage, e.g. Business Card, web, and other things I can't think of because I is shattered.
- knars0
good stuff. have you tried it as a brush?