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- hellogoodbye
Happy Thurs ya'll. Something I've been working on. Still a few tweaks left to go...
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http://url123.co.uk/7ee3a1
- WeLoveNoise0
really dig it :)
only thing i crit on was the colour of the links - have u put some gradient on it or something cos it doesnt look right for some reason
- OSFA0
nice, but the typeface/text is bothering me a little
- monospaced0
Work on the margins. In some places they seem huge, in others they seem ignored. Basically, work with your grid better.
Other consistency issues include putting white borders around image thumbnails vs drop shadows. And the Did You Know unit seems to just float in the space provided instead of locking up to something. Just my two cents (I'm not a web guy).
- Beach8oy20
Why is May much colder than both April & June?
- jsaul0
yeah, nice, the only thing is I didnt quite understand what it was about at first, I kind of dismissed the 'did you know' panel and the logo as banner ads or something like that
- skt0
you text boxes are dropping off the page in history... and some content is not removed properly when moving between sections.
and like monospaced said, you need a much tighter grid.
- GetRefresh0
Very cool!
But there is some clipping/cutting off of the content at the bottom of the HISTORY page (the scroll bar in the content window gets clipped).
- twokids0
the photos need to be a lot bigger. Everest, mountains, you want to see the images...
- zenmasterfoo0
tighten it up. too much padding between elements.
- hellogoodbye0
tightening....polishing....
- zenmasterfoo0
- lol beautiful. major fixing time.hellogoodbye
- yup i had that too.sureshot
- Cptn_Uncanny0
Agreed there is maybe a bit too much padding.
The copyright info displays under everything if you size the window around. Maybe it should be on top?
...Otherwise I like it.
- nicole_marie0
very nice love the overall layout, that red vibrates a little bit and something about the boxes to the left are odd to me, i feel like their placement could be more thought out. the large text is a little odd as well maybe something a little bit more simple.
- soynutz70
LIke Zen and Hello say, tighen it up. the left column seems to seperated from the rest of the content.
- hellogoodbye0
whoa now that I step back and look at things I'm seeing stuff done half assed. funny how that works....ugh.....
- svenreed0
totally agree with the grid being a bit loose. the logo (top left) seems disconnected from everything else. of course re-designing it would be a whole new project.
yet, the only other thing i have an issue with is the sections menu, its floating on me. i think swapping it in place with the content to the right would be more appropriate and expected for most users.
bigger images would really help too! great work, keep us posted.
- PonyBoy0
you can't get all clickidy w/the site (as zenmasterfoo shows)... I was simply trying to jump to another section and had the same overlap issues he's showing above...
... also the 'sections' once in a section - a transition in/out between transitions would be nice... right now it's pretty abrupt.
Also - under 'location' - the second time i click into it - the topography map stays put and lays over the text box -
- uberdesigner0
why is everything flickering?
- jasonistaken0
Please make the scroll wheel work for your scrollable content areas.