Site Crit ver III
- Started
- Last post
- 13 Responses
- exador10
damn...thats a nice looking site.
- ukit0
Much better than the previous version!
Just a couple suggestions. I'm not a big fan of the stock photo at the bottom of the page. It might make your mockup look a little nicer, but what 's the point? I think you should stick to what you need on the page to be functional.
Kill the reflections onthe names. And the items in the top right hand nav look weirdly spaced out - it looks like you're trying to follow the grid, but there's too much space between them.
- Ewak0
I would get rid of the guy but yes much better then previous.
- graphiknature0
I agree with what he said above. I don't really have a problem with the spacing so much as much as the wight lines in the nav. Maybe make them darker or try a different effect to divide them. Maybe it's the darker gradient... I'm not sure something seems off about it though. I would put a thin border around The Top naming Assignments. The jagged edges between the rows is distracting and makes it seem a bit cluttered and busy.
Besides that I think it's solid. Nice work!
- One more thing. Maybe bump up the type or change the color on the Headlines for The Top naming Assignments and Sign Up and begin Using naming Force. They seem to be a bit to similar to the paragraph above it.graphiknature
- jevad0
Lose the reflections.
- WeLoveNoise0
alot better mate
- VectorMasked0
Better than the previous ones.
Maybe lighten the background by like nothing... just to add some contrast between the bg and the black buttons.
How about decreasing the size of the text in the footer? it's a footer after all. This is why the previous version seemed crowded because every elemtent was huge and wanted attention (no real hierarchy).
- monNom0
the 'need a name' and 'want to name' clipboards should have more distinct differences. Maybe one can be reversed text, which then carries through for all information pertinent to that user group.
the chrome clamp looks a bit messy, and illustration might work better if it needs to be a clipboard.
The asterisk footnote for 'Make money*' should be closer to the passage of text (if not directly below). currently it's completely disconnected sitting below the subscribe form.
- monNom0
After a bit more thought, maybe you should only show one clipboard depending on which path they choose? That would be clearer.
- n0rty10
that man has some neat backwards handwriting. yup lose the guy. reading from top left to bottom right he's a huge anchor on the page and distracting.
information is chunked nicely. good design overall
- slappy0
100% better than the old site. Just lose the dude, doesnt need a photo.
- irrelevant0
as always, thanks for all the feedback..