Logo crit
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- Raniator0
Too big. Imagine that on a letterhead or business card. Never going to happen. And yeah, the font looks weird.
- Cabein0
I thought the name was strong and so i wanted the rest of the elements to be minor accents..
I made the text lower case so it never felt as if it was preaching
The lines came from chatting with the client about pathways, building confidence etc. the ascending curve footsteps. While the other 2 paths were longer and confusing ...I also thought it would be ok if the lines were just fine dots when smaller on a card...
The company is very small just 2 people. Letterheads, business cards and a 4-5 pg website
After i did this rough i knew it could be better and dropped it on here for some feedback. Will start again today fresh.... all points taken onboard
- Cabein0
- illegible and unconnectednilsnihil
- is that an ouija7point34
- The mark looks much better. Try some different typfaces. Look at some sansbaseline_shift