Is this logo crap?
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- kalkal0
"for my portfolio site/Art community"
Isn't it kinda better to keep the two seperate....?
- epikore0
Get some ideas here
- pravdawork0
Fail
- uan0
i like the shape in your first post. make the characters more legible. start making the shield shape more into a W mimicking the K and H. work on the K and H mimicking the resulting W. balance them...some nice shape games in this constellation.
I like 'brush', because of the punk character. I read it as intended. but look for another brush...maybe you find some inspiration in the helmet patterns, structures posted before.
I read the 'bomb' shape to in it too...very martial
- harlequino0
The shape and X is making me think "Straight Edge's Dreidel"
- sputnik20
first thing i thought of was "straight edge"
- gramme0
Draw a symmetrical arm and leg on your K. Make your H symmetrical too. Keep both letters heavy but not nearly so clogged up as they are now, I couldn't read KH until it was pointed out.
Keep the arm/leg of the K separate from the body. Repeat that shape in the taper of your shield.
Have you tried reversing KH out of your shield?
I would do away with the X altogether, as others have said it's entirely irrelevant.
- brandelec0
sorry mate, i don't see any purpose in the elements you chose to use
- janne760
i think it is absolutely fantastic.
- gentleman0
rybo?
- 3point141590
The shields seem to be stretched out and not true to the general shape, function & form of a traditional shield of armor.
- chossy0
4. 7. 10.
lets go for it you guys!
- eryx0
I think Number 8 is the right direction. But it sill looks a bit unbalanced
- dyspl0
-sit down.
-breath.-open any text editor.
-write ideas about your art community.
-make a brief from those ideas.
-make a logo from the brief.et voila.
- gentleman0
have you made any decisions for any of these designs on purpose?
did you just have a bit of a dick around with the swirl tool on number 8?
why is the shield so long?
why is that divider line there on number 10 if you already divided it diagonally?
why is the bottom of the shield so awkwardly pointy and why doesnt it flow from a curve off the sides?
it looks to me like you're just throwing shit on a page.. and if you cant be fucked to give any reasoning behind your choices.. i cant be fucked to help you out..help me to help you.. (as my beloved Tom Cruise once said... *siiigh*)
- Gifto0
If the shield is in reference to the name, it all feel's a bit too literal, and incongruous to what you actually do - though I may be wrong, having only looked at your holding page.
You could probably create a much simpler identity (possibly just a wordmark) that would hold it's own, given the quite interesting sounding name.
Btw, Kingharmsworth is spelt wrong at the top of your holding page. Keep going though, good luck.
- jimzyk0
make the logo bigger.