Portfolio/Site crit
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- cls0
Love your work/site mate.
- soynutz70
i'm impressed
- jiaf0
- cramdesign0
Really impressive portfolio.
- JerseyRaindog0
Think there's really nice work in there and I'm a fan of the long scrolling one page myself.
That said - minor gripe, think the work at the bottom is noticeably weaker (from the paws section) than stuff in the beginning and the middle. Maybe you just need to be more selective with what you show? Otherwise top work OSFA.
Why no psb in there?
- I know what you mean, I've been thinking about it as well... but I don;t know about PSBs...OSFA
- Just kidding about the psb...JerseyRaindog
- hahaha, it would be great tho!OSFA
- gung_hoek0
I really liek the site + the work. simple, good looking, serves it´s purpose.
had a problem with the pdf-folio: download went well, but my reader says the file is corrupted. maybe worth looking into..
- OSFA0
Thanks for all the great feedback guys! I'm glad top designers (you) have so many great things to say about my work. Keeps me motivated!
Regarding the resume, I'm still working on it since I'm relocating by the end of the year. I'll look into all the suggestions and make a few changes. I'll keep you posted.
- skt0
good work osfa!
- digdre0
nice work OSFA
- moamoa0
very nice work. the fock stuff looks lovely.
I just don´t like your own logo ;)
- OSFA0
Thanks! moa, is it because it's a crest?
- fusionpixel0
I dont like it, something about scrolling down forever makes me yawn. When I see a site where I have to scroll forever I just close it.
- really? I hate clicking and opening new windows=getting lost...OSFA
- Absolutely totally agree...sunshinetherapy
- Renegade0
Nice work and a simple site design.
My only crit: add "return to top" arrows between each project and on the bottom of the page.
- OSFA0
^ Working on it...
- OSFA0
Alright gents, I've been working on a few things for my site, it's pretty much going to stay the same, with the suggested improvements of course, but I am freakin stuck at my id! I don't hate it, but feel it's a little dated if you know what I mean.
Any suggestions at what I can do? I'm blocked and need some suggestions. Moa, you got anything? Thanks in advance peeps!
- Dancer0
hahaha
I looked at your work and then read all the comments here.
My only comment would've been "you need a new logo"... but yo have just said it.
Great portfolio though OSFA
- Nairn0
I was just about to repeat what moamoa said - I don't see why you'd need to overly brand yourself. A decent logotype should suffice, and you seem to be capable of making them! If you do want to stick with your pseudo-heraldric form, I'd consider removing the unnervingly prophylactic-like elements jutting out of each side.
My only other suggestion would be to introduce some Lazy Loader type JS functionality to increase the page load time and bring in an element of dynamism to the site, but hey, that's just me.
Nice work, man.