not actual logo crit
- Started 17 years ago
- Last post 17 years ago
- 117 Responses
- janne760
ok, (talking to myself now) i think i will go for a wordmark now.. serif on top, sans for VORM..
- is this mark meant as sarcasm, or not? if so, the humor will not be seen without the unicorn********
- is this mark meant as sarcasm, or not? if so, the humor will not be seen without the unicorn
- moamoa0
maybe Gotham with a modified M like here.
I did this also for my puclin logo
- could anything be more full of shit than tom ford and his luxury brethren?********
- magnificent_ruin == max_prophet ?janne76
- no, just have had it up to here with branding bullshit********
- ah.. ok then..janne76
- I con´t care about tom ford in this case, I am just talking about the font.moamoa
- I know, wasn't saying anything against you... I admire your design********
- *phewjanne76
- haha thanks ;) compliment back.
but we do have the same opinion abou this brand ;)moamoa
- could anything be more full of shit than tom ford and his luxury brethren?
- ********0
leave it as gold bars, and each time you click it tallies up more money on the screen to buy imaginary bullshit luxury items
- janne760
yeah, haven't tried gotham yet.. cheers..
- ********0
I would do the following:
• Make the logo smaller
• Tighten up the space between bars
• Tighten up the space between the portfolio title
Here is website that kinda reminds me of your portfolio layout:
zavesmith.com- good points... however i won't tighten up the bars.. they are meant to represent text lines..janne76
- I get that, text lines can be represented by any space********
- goto zavesmith.com he uses the text style piece in his loading...********
- ah yes i see what you mean with zavesmith.. it's also on one of the books of victionary btw..janne76
- yeah good pointsmoamoa
- NotByHand0
Here's a sans serif version. I altered the color of "GIMME SOME" to make it more like the "PAN" one.
Just a suggestion.-
- ukit0
I could also see the full mark appearing on some kind of intro page, and then just the unicorn appearing on the actual site.
A bit like: http://www.maxalot.com/mxlt/conc…
- janne760
btw. Gotham worked excellent on VORM, in black that is.
in sans VORM should be in black weight anyway..
- moamoa0
- try black now for a change.. :)janne76
- btw i did not modify the M like you did there though...janne76
- I often end up using Gotham, even when I don't want to********
- Moamoa, hurry up with moamoa sans!********
- I hate the Gotham Mmoamoa
- hahha yeah after this thread I am motivated again ;)moamoa
- I wish they'd provide an alt********
- the best thing is: no S no G so you don´t see its Gothammoamoa
- haah i agree.. gotham is just so well balanced. :)janne76
- my note was a response to umpty notes back..janne76
- moamoa0
- in this case it needs to be a bit thickermoamoa
- i love black on black.. you saw it with my jaline logo as well in the blog thread or not? ;)janne76
- fuck i jsut now get the joke..
"BLACK" haha..janne76 - yeah I know you just wanted to show me your 3d skills. which I doubt you.moamoa
- I refer Medium on blackmoamoa
- prefermoamoa
- fck maomoa go back and learn your vocabulariesmoamoa
- something like this for the Gimme some? http://www.researchs…moamoa
- http://www.researchs…moamoa
- http://www.myfonts.c…moamoa
- hey nice, moamoa. thanks!janne76
- http://fonts.goldenw…moamoa
- didn't know research studios btw. cheers for the link..janne76
- here is the free version of French script
http://www.fontcente…
moamoa - nice moa.janne76
- janne760
ok i need to let this one rest... check back tomorrow. gotta get something else done.
i am still in the middle of going for functional, elegant, understated or tongue-in-cheek pretentiousness as i presented here.
any honest opinions are welcome.
nice or harsh.
any added constructive arguments are a plus though!
thanks so far everyone!
- janne760
i will post my latest concept though.. hold on a moment..
- janne760
but now it seems like a whole new name.
perhaps i should jsut rebrand vormburo altogether.i was just tired of using the vormburo logo together with the two C's but i got still so much nice printed (expens.) stock with that logo ..
- nice. just the M just the M is .... lalalalmoamoa
- I KNOW ABOUT THE M.. GO FINISH YOUR FUCKING FONT FFS!!!!janne76
- ;)janne76
- but I prefer this compared to your other versions. muchhhh bettermoamoa
- but but but don´t be so mean. you said you are an illustrator PRO ;)moamoa
- haha.. see my comment about the M below. yeah, i like it better as well..janne76
- janne760
oh yes, about the M..
in Black i do not think it would work any other way unless it is massively extended or has an inconsequent thickness..- ok ok I see I will stop it. nice M btwmoamoa
- ok enough now. no more thick M´s
http://www.amen-stor…
http://upload.wikime…
moamoa - ok it is possible.. but i like it this way.. sometimes, you need a real dutch "poldermodel" compromise.. ;)janne76
- anyway it look nice. and very dutch. good boy.moamoa
- ha thank you, my german freund.janne76
- janne760
NEXT QUESTION IS:
IF i'd go with a whole new logo, where do i fit in the word BURO?
as vorm.nl and vorm.eu (etc.) are all gone.. :(
Or I do go with VRMBR, which i registered at the chamber of commerce as well...
- janne760
might as well go with the new name then..
- moamoa0
100orm
